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eerie paradise MAG

May 29, 2012
By chrisvfree PLATINUM, N/A, Florida
chrisvfree PLATINUM, N/A, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
I pretty much try to stay in a constant state of confusion just because of the expression it leaves on my face. - Johnny Depp


hair
floats in fallen sun
light.

glints of gold
catch upon the
dark
ness.

sweetened breath
frozen violet
dew
drops.

slide from leaves
once dead.

life and death
crossing at the sun down.
yield to moonlight
once known as the sun.
winter veils
all the signs of
warmness
and the dark
falls across the sky …

savor
sounds of
the silver rainfall.

pouring down
raindrops
won't touch the ground
here

pools of gray …
twinkle in the sky …

hair
floats in fallen sun
light.

bring me there
i'm sure the wind will
follow.

desperate air
escapes from mouths
asunder.

dark water
flows beyond lost clouds …

take me there.



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on Oct. 27 2012 at 6:53 pm
writer3499 GOLD, New Bedford, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"it's impossible to live without failing at something, unless you live so cautiously that you might has well not have lived at all-in which case you fail by default."
-J.K.Rowling

Amazing! Great work. Congradulations on getting it published in the magazine!