Giving Up

May 23, 2012
You just don’t
Get it,
Do you?

For too long,
I’ve sat here,
Waiting for you
To be yourself.

Now, I’m done
I can’t do it

I’m letting go.
I’m saying good-bye.
I’m deeply sorry
For our loss.

But the fault
is yours. It’s
On your head.
And now,
I can be free.

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InkWriter13 said...
Jul. 7, 2012 at 6:20 pm
Nice poem. Simple, yet spoken with great clarity. Organized well, and for that, I am grateful. That's so crucial for us as writers. I like the format and the short phrasings. It works well with your poem. Great writing overall. 5 stars. :) Would you please comment on two of my poems (you can choose)?
SHY_GIRL replied...
Feb. 26, 2013 at 6:03 pm
I agree with u. It was really great wasn't it?
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