My Thoughts

May 21, 2012
By Khadisha BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
Khadisha BRONZE, Cleveland, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Obstacles are those things that we see when we take our eyes off of our goal" "UNKNOWN"

In my eyes I see you as beautiful.
Like a flower of it's own species.
Like the tree outside of the computer labs window.
You seem to race through my mind all day.
Like a Ferrari 458 Spider.
Causing me to daydream.
Wanting to sleep.
Because it's the only moment when it feels real.
When you speak to me.
It's like listening to the ocean.
Smooth and soft.
Your voice hypnotizes me.
It makes me your slave.
But by willingness.
I will never run so I don't chains.
As you can see you fill up my mind.
And continuously occupy my thoughts.

The author's comments:
I was in the computer lab during my lunch period at school and I just began to write.The things that were racing through my mind.

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so_joy SILVER said...
on Jan. 13 2013 at 10:18 am
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Wow! Amazing! Left me wondering about the situation. Great job!It would mean a lot if you looked at my work and let me know what you think. Thanks!


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