Inside Me

May 22, 2012
By starzforever GOLD, Sebring, Florida
starzforever GOLD, Sebring, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
being me is the greatest gift


When some one ask how I feel??
on the out side I smile.
Physically I'm lacking strength.
Emotionally I'm drained.
Mentally I'm not thinking.
On the inside I'm unpredictable.


The author's comments:
when I feel like some things bring me down.

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Goldy97 said...
on Jun. 1 2012 at 8:26 pm
it deos describe me well.

on May. 29 2012 at 4:26 pm
ignorance_is_bliss PLATINUM, Memphis, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
"This is what it is, this is who I am
This is where I finally take my stand
I didn't wanna fall but I about to crawl
I met the one with two scarred hands"

-Newsboys, Born Again

wow, lots of emotion:) reminds me of my poem, on the inside :)

on May. 29 2012 at 4:14 pm
Logan_Elizabeth28 BRONZE, Willard, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Just Promise Me You'll Think Of Me Everytime You Look Up In The Sky And See A Star
-Eminem
"You're The Beautiful One, It's Society That's Ugly"
-Marilyn Monroe
"Rock, Paper, Scissors, Lizard, Spock!"
-The Big Bang Theory

So Much Emotion For A Short Poem. Brilliant Piece. 

~Logan



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