May 22, 2012
Sometimes I wonder if the beginning is not just the beginning
Possibly, just the continuation of a being before
The creator of the universe
Who all Heaven and Earth should adore

Though this man, our creator, our friend
Is shunned, mistreated, and spat upon
His name is rejected and rebuked
From basically everything, his name withdrawn

This man is my Savior
My life, my Hope, and Friend
The everlasting redeemer
The Great I AM.

So, I'll leave you with this thought
My friends and friends of friends
If God did not create you
Then tell me world, what did?

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free2beme said...
May 28, 2012 at 5:29 pm
ya, thts why i write about my faith. thx alot for the boost of encouragement:)
satellite23 said...
May 28, 2012 at 2:24 pm
I like it. In fact, it reminds me of the very first poem I submitted to this website. Check it out--"Hey Child"
satellite23 replied...
May 28, 2012 at 2:27 pm

Oh yeah, and I love the last line. "Tell me world, who did?"


Stand up for your beliefs and don't let anybody tell you otherwise.

Imran said...
May 27, 2012 at 8:36 pm
the big bang
free2beme replied...
May 28, 2012 at 1:43 pm
no, i dont believe in tht. im a christian. this poem talks about God.
believe@faith replied...
May 28, 2012 at 8:24 pm
I agree- Can't you see the beauty of every small thing was created by a designer greater and smarter than us? A TRUE artist!!!  And greater than just a thoery... in order to see you must believe, you must open your eyes. Free2beme- Love your poem and understood your point.
free2beme replied...
May 29, 2012 at 10:52 am

thank you so much. i have high belief in God, and I dont doubt him at all. i dont believe in any theory of the "big bang" Thts what this poem is about. A true artist who knows exactly what he's doing:)


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