Reflections of memories

May 23, 2012
By Breah BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
Breah BRONZE, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because it's over, smile because is happened."


I couldn’t help but notice
Reflections in your eyes
Yet when I turned to seal the fate
Reflections were just lies

Twisting turning cheating lies
Are what have brought us here
To a place where memories fade
And reflections show your fears

Fears of going back
To when memories were born
Yet after all we have gone through
Time is what we mourn

I never would have noticed
Reflections in your eyes
If not for
Memories adored
Yet seemingly only reflections


The author's comments:
I wrote this peice about things lost, things found, things forgotten, and things remembered.

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on Sep. 18 2012 at 9:13 pm
MadelynHope BRONZE, Trophy Club, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them." -Walt Disney

Simply great :)

TaurusGal GOLD said...
on May. 30 2012 at 10:34 pm
TaurusGal GOLD, Hong Kong, Other
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Simple and great.  Love how you split the sentences and make the poem alive.  

on May. 30 2012 at 6:18 pm
Fantasy100 BRONZE, Bronx, New York
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I like the first stanza...i feel like its something one can see happening.

on May. 30 2012 at 6:16 pm
Fantasy100 BRONZE, Bronx, New York
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Omg...i love your poem. It moved me.

elizamc83 GOLD said...
on May. 30 2012 at 6:14 pm
elizamc83 GOLD, Concord, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"From now on, I don't care if my tea leaves spell 'Die, Ron, die,' I'm chucking them in the bin where they belong." -Ron Weasley

I really like this! Sometimes rhyming takes away from the poem but you did a nice job with it :)

DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 29 2012 at 2:02 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I liked your poem. It was very intersting. The only suggestion is maybe extended on this whole reflection of memories theme. Other that i found this poem really good.

on May. 28 2012 at 11:07 am
comfortablynumb7, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
" You want too much. you expect too much then when your hero disappoints you, your poor little heart gets crushed" <another quote>"If you don't earn respect when you're alive, you don't deserve it when you're dead."

I really do love the poem. It has alot of rhythm its really good. And your emotions are so clear. Amazing work.

5 out of 5


on May. 28 2012 at 10:55 am
Anny_Grace SILVER, Centennial, Colorado
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I love your line breaks! it adds to the poetry and rythm. I love to hear your voice more in the piece though. The message to so clear and the emotions drawn out! This is really your style.


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