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May 6, 2012
By Anonymous

try this try that.
how much can you take, before you draw back. observe from the outside. dodge-balling peer pressure. step outside where your breath might be fresher.not that it stinks, but don't you dare think, you're better than those who give in. you're dancing on the edge of falling in that addictive cycle and never coming back.so give the rehabilitates some slack. you see it's your decision that affects your vision of your future.life is yours do what you will with her.

© Anonymous

The author's comments:
my friend is in rehab herself. i also know some people who gave in, and others who look down upon them. i hope this will touch a nerve and inspire.
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