How it is...

May 6, 2012
The clock buzzes low
Watching the numbers
Disappearing and reforming themselves
With each passing moment.

Restlessly lying,
Remebering
And crying
Hoping it wouldn't end like it did.





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DanielM said...
Jun. 13, 2012 at 9:53 pm
Great job. I really like your title and your message. Only suggestion the format is kind of confusing to me.
 
TraceS. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 13, 2012 at 9:53 pm
Good, but far too short. A longer version, perhaps?
 
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