How it is...

May 6, 2012
By JordanMarie GOLD, Hanska, Minnesota
JordanMarie GOLD, Hanska, Minnesota
10 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Im shy not antisocial: You can talk to me!


The clock buzzes low
Watching the numbers
Disappearing and reforming themselves
With each passing moment.

Restlessly lying,
Remebering
And crying
Hoping it wouldn't end like it did.



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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2012 at 9:53 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Great job. I really like your title and your message. Only suggestion the format is kind of confusing to me.

on Jun. 13 2012 at 9:53 pm
TraceBatWingsAndBrokenStrings DIAMOND, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"This gun has stopped time in its tracks, has altered the course of our fate. Destiny is shattered and timeless. Closed eyes feel the cold winds embrace."
-Avenged Sevenfold

Good, but far too short. A longer version, perhaps?


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