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I love him, I love him not
April 30, 2012
I love him, I love him not
He’s captured my heart
He’s torn it apart
Leaves me gasping for air
Leaves me with this pain to bare
He makes me smile
He turns up the dial
I love him, I love him not
He makes me feel alive
He leaves me to die inside
Tears of joy
Tears of pain
He takes my breath away
Leaving my edges frayed
I love him, I love him not
He makes me see the true me
He makes me hide her underneath
Beautiful man
Monster inside
I want to stay
I want to run and hide
I love him, I love him not
Glistening eyes
A pool of light
A heartless soul
A deep dark hole
I want him forever
But forever comes with never
I love him, I love him not.
© Jeff H., Marblehead, MA
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This article has 11 comments.
Jeremyyy said...
on Dec. 25 2012 at 1:49 am
real good but naive :P
AlaskaGirl GOLD said...
on Oct. 31 2012 at 12:07 am
I love it! <3
Logan_Elizabeth28 BRONZE said...
on Oct. 12 2012 at 9:21 am
this was beautiful.
BlueSunset BRONZE said...
on Oct. 9 2012 at 9:08 am
Absoloutely great! I can really feel the emotion in this poem. I love it. x
Overall I like the story, but I didn't exactly care for the overused statement "He loves me, he loves me not." Don't get me wrong, I'm all for repeating lines in poetry. But when the lines repeat, they really need to pack a punch. (And also show a bit of uniqueness about the author). I still love the poem, I can relate to it, but it's just the one line that bothers me. Thank you for the post!
Swimmerguy SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2012 at 2:34 pm
nice love, really touches
LoveEternally SILVER said...
on Jul. 1 2012 at 12:24 am
Thanks, honey bunches!
LoveEternally SILVER said...
on Jul. 1 2012 at 12:23 am
Thanks Court <3
Just-Another-Girl GOLD said...
on May. 26 2012 at 12:11 pm
can really relate with this poem good work keep it up
SkylerMorningstar GOLD said...
on May. 23 2012 at 8:40 pm
really awesome love i really liked it
