I love him, I love him not

April 30, 2012
By LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments

I love him, I love him not
He’s captured my heart
He’s torn it apart
Leaves me gasping for air
Leaves me with this pain to bare
He makes me smile
He turns up the dial

I love him, I love him not
He makes me feel alive
He leaves me to die inside
Tears of joy
Tears of pain
He takes my breath away
Leaving my edges frayed

I love him, I love him not
He makes me see the true me
He makes me hide her underneath
Beautiful man
Monster inside
I want to stay
I want to run and hide

I love him, I love him not
Glistening eyes
A pool of light
A heartless soul
A deep dark hole
I want him forever
But forever comes with never

I love him, I love him not.



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This article has 11 comments.


Jeremyyy said...
on Dec. 25 2012 at 1:49 am
real good but naive :P

on Oct. 31 2012 at 12:07 am
AlaskaGirl GOLD, Klawock, Alaska
11 articles 4 photos 147 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Screw the shining armor. I will take my man in dirty camo any day"

I love it! <3

on Oct. 12 2012 at 9:21 am
Logan_Elizabeth28 BRONZE, Willard, Ohio
4 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Promise Me You'll Think Of Me Everytime You Look Up In The Sky And See A Star
-Eminem
"You're The Beautiful One, It's Society That's Ugly"
-Marilyn Monroe
"Rock, Paper, Scissors, Lizard, Spock!"
-The Big Bang Theory

this was beautiful.

on Oct. 9 2012 at 9:08 am
BlueSunset BRONZE, Barcelona, Other
3 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind"- Dr. Seuss

Absoloutely great! I can really feel the emotion in this poem. I love it. x

on Aug. 18 2012 at 6:02 pm
Ivvilynn BRONZE, LiIttleton, Colorado
4 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
We’re all a little weird. And life’s a little weird. And when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in to mutual weirdness and call it love.

Awww...Allie....

on Aug. 8 2012 at 1:57 pm
MaeSilver SILVER, Columbia, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Wherever you go, go with all your heart.

Overall I like the story, but I didn't exactly care for the overused statement "He loves me, he loves me not." Don't get me wrong, I'm all for repeating lines in poetry. But when the lines repeat, they really need to pack a punch. (And also show a bit of uniqueness about the author). I still love the poem, I can relate to it, but it's just the one line that bothers me. Thank you for the post!

on Aug. 2 2012 at 2:34 pm
Swimmerguy SILVER, N/A, Iowa
8 articles 3 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
Loving someone doesnt need a reason. If you can explain why you love someone, its not called "love"... Its called "like".

nice love, really touches

on Jul. 1 2012 at 12:24 am
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments
Thanks, honey bunches!

on Jul. 1 2012 at 12:23 am
LoveEternally SILVER, Castle Rock, Colorado
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments
Thanks Court <3

on May. 26 2012 at 12:11 pm
Just-Another-Girl GOLD, Keighley, Other
17 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
- "A coward may survive...but a hero..a hero lives on in the hearts of the people he saved"

- "Words don't have the power to hurt people, unless the person who said it means a lot"

-
You say that love is nonsense. I tell you it is no such thing._

 can really relate with this poem good work keep it up

on May. 23 2012 at 8:40 pm
SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
13 articles 1 photo 47 comments
really awesome love i really liked it


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