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The Snow

May 18, 2012
By GareBear BRONZE, Wilton, Iowa
GareBear BRONZE, Wilton, Iowa
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I can feel the light, cold snowflakes softly touch me,
While I look out at the white field.
The brightness hurts my eyes, but I can’t look away.
The snow is amazing:
All sparkly from the sun shining down on it.
It’s surface untouched.
It’s all so beautiful.
But it angers me.
There’s nothing special about the snow.
There’s no warm feeling to it.
I can feel its stone cold glare at me.
It feels as if it doesn’t want me here,
Like it wants me gone forever,
To just fall off the face of the earth,
The snow mocks me with its beautiful, sparkly surface.
A chill goes through me and now I’m cold.
Like the snow took my soul and turned it to ice.
The snow is winning.
It angers me even more.
I pick up a nearby branch.
I go out through the untouched snow and I walk all over it.
I swing my branch at the snow destroying its perfect surface.
I’m out of breath when I’m and I start walking away.
Once I’m almost gone I look back to the field,
Covered with wreaked snow.
Nobody’s going to like this snow anymore.
A smile comes to my face.
I beat the snow I think to myself with a bigger smile.
And I walk away, mocking the snow.


The author's comments:
This poem expresses how much I don't like the snow and that I don't like to be cold. It also tells how people think their perfect and others hide in the shadows while they are being mocked by the "perfect" people and that the people who are not perfect can mock the others because nobody is perfect.

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