Death of a loved one

May 15, 2012
By Anonymous

Bruised on the heart
Because death of a loved one has attacked you
Healing is just another art
The sweet memories make you boo
Having a loved one get ripped from your arms is tart
You will never be good as new
When you hear the news you will fall apart
Whenever you hurt it will feel like déjà vu
Why your loved one was taken away, may be as confusing as abstract art
Gone in an instant, the person you looked up to



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Paulyh BRONZE said...
on May. 21 2012 at 7:47 pm
Paulyh BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
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This is good and sad. sounds really good though

on May. 21 2012 at 7:44 pm
Frannygirl BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
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Good but Sad! You should take a look at my poetry!

 


on May. 21 2012 at 7:39 pm
Hopefulhiggins, Westminster, Colorado
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This is good.. sad.. but true

on May. 21 2012 at 7:35 pm
Nick1018740 BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
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this is good really sad though!!

on May. 21 2012 at 7:33 pm
palderdaerica BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
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This is really good has nice flow to it!

 


on May. 21 2012 at 7:31 pm
Holls1018740 BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
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I love this. Really depressing. It really makes you miss your loved one!

on May. 21 2012 at 7:23 pm
Johnnyboy1018740 BRONZE, Westminster, Colorado
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I love this! its kinda sad. But really touching!

 


OnlinePerson said...
on May. 21 2012 at 7:16 pm
OnlinePerson, Westminster, Colorado
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I love it i recently lost a very close friend. I really relate

flyer said...
on May. 21 2012 at 10:58 am
flyer, Auroara, Hawaii
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sad poem but still a good one.

tigers said...
on May. 18 2012 at 11:21 am
tigers, Arvada, Colorado
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love it:) It really sounds great!




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