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Death of a loved one

By , thorton, CO
Bruised on the heart
Because death of a loved one has attacked you
Healing is just another art
The sweet memories make you boo
Having a loved one get ripped from your arms is tart
You will never be good as new
When you hear the news you will fall apart
Whenever you hurt it will feel like déjà vu
Why your loved one was taken away, may be as confusing as abstract art
Gone in an instant, the person you looked up to





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Paulyh said...
May 21, 2012 at 7:47 pm
This is good and sad. sounds really good though
 
Frannygirl said...
May 21, 2012 at 7:44 pm

Good but Sad! You should take a look at my poetry!

 

 
Hopefulhiggins said...
May 21, 2012 at 7:39 pm
This is good.. sad.. but true
 
Nick1018740 said...
May 21, 2012 at 7:35 pm
this is good really sad though!!
 
palderdaerica said...
May 21, 2012 at 7:33 pm

This is really good has nice flow to it!

 

 
Holls1018740 said...
May 21, 2012 at 7:31 pm
I love this. Really depressing. It really makes you miss your loved one!
 
Johnnyboy1018740 said...
May 21, 2012 at 7:23 pm

I love this! its kinda sad. But really touching!

 

 
OnlinePerson said...
May 21, 2012 at 7:16 pm
I love it i recently lost a very close friend. I really relate
 
flyer said...
May 21, 2012 at 10:58 am
sad poem but still a good one.
 
tigers said...
May 18, 2012 at 11:21 am
love it:) It really sounds great!
 
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