The Journey Of My Tears

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Cascading one by one;
from the creases of my bloodshot eyes
L
down the hook of my polluted nose
O
through the crimson pastels on my lips
V
over the tiers of my cobweb dress
E
and onto the welcome mat that no longer is...





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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 25, 2012 at 11:34 am
Well, I liked it but it was just okay for me. I think you could've expanded on this poem. I like that the poem kind of tapers off, leaving the reader to wonder why the speaker is crying, but I don't know, I just would've liked it a little longer.
 
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