The Journey Of My Tears

May 14, 2012
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Cascading one by one;
from the creases of my bloodshot eyes
down the hook of my polluted nose
through the crimson pastels on my lips
over the tiers of my cobweb dress
and onto the welcome mat that no longer is...

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beautifulspirit This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 25, 2012 at 11:34 am
Well, I liked it but it was just okay for me. I think you could've expanded on this poem. I like that the poem kind of tapers off, leaving the reader to wonder why the speaker is crying, but I don't know, I just would've liked it a little longer.
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