Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

love...

Love
Fire works
Words colliding
Heart beating
Stricken by lightning
Breathing quickens
Blood thickens.
Eyes go blurry
Free of worry
Head feels light
Heart incites
Secret language
Of romance and sanguine
It’s the beginning of a new day
Love can make beautiful changes



Join the Discussion


This article has 4 comments. Post your own!

DawnieRaeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 30, 2013 at 6:03 pm:
really cool poem. I love all the poems that you have written, my favorite so far is Love is.. Really great job angel!! 
 
xXxXangelXxXxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 1:16 pm :
thank u spo much dawnierae, sorry havent been on here forever. anything u need checked out?  
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
DanielM said...
Jul. 16, 2012 at 2:39 pm:
Awesome poem. Great job on the descriptions. I really like the end of the poem. Suggestion: expand more with more details maybe
 
xXxXangelXxXxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 27, 2013 at 8:12 pm :
Thx so much :)
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback