May 10, 2012
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Shine star, glint, glimmer, glitter
Let your light, all people blind
Make the earth clothed in silver
So bright, the specks of black, none shall find.

Transform the ugly greys
Into purest, pearly light
Touch tired souls with your rays
And rejuvenate the dying fight;
The will of people to survive,
To create, to give, and to receive
Nature’s gifts, and revive
Those who are broken on this lonely eve.

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Ray--yoThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 30, 2015 at 9:15 am
I enjoyed the rhyming and the beautiful flow, really nice work!
SongBird04 said...
Jun. 9, 2013 at 9:24 pm
This is very interesting! I enjoyed reading it! Nice job :)
LunaLives said...
Nov. 30, 2012 at 9:40 pm
Beautiful word choice.
Blue_dove replied...
Jan. 4, 2013 at 7:42 pm
Old work, but probably one of the better exemplars. Thanks for reading.
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