the way you make me feel

May 10, 2012
By strongernow SILVER, F-bo, Minnesota
strongernow SILVER, F-bo, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"be who you want to be. those who mind don't matter, and those that matter won't mind"
-Dr. Seuss
"be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
-Philo


the way you make me feel is indescribable. i see you and my heart skips a beat. you smile and my breath leaves. you make my hand glued to my hand and my eyes glued to my phone. i live for your texts. when your hand holds mine, i never want to let go. when you do let go, my heart feels empty and lost. i think about you always, for you never leave my mind. i sit in your sweatshirt and can almost feel your warmth around me, but it doesn't compare to your hugs. nothing compares to your hugs..



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on May. 30 2012 at 11:59 am
strongernow SILVER, F-bo, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"be who you want to be. those who mind don't matter, and those that matter won't mind"
-Dr. Seuss
"be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
-Philo

why thank you :) i'll most deffinetly work on my spacing! hehe

on May. 23 2012 at 1:50 pm
strongernow SILVER, F-bo, Minnesota
8 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"be who you want to be. those who mind don't matter, and those that matter won't mind"
-Dr. Seuss
"be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle"
-Philo

its supposed to be "phone glued to my hand, and eyes glued to my phone".. lol

DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 22 2012 at 6:43 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

I really liked the your poem. It was very intersting. The only thing i suggest is maybe spacing out your lines and putting a little bit emotion when you were talking about the "sweatshirt part" that was really cool and intersting. Good jov

raeee GOLD said...
on May. 22 2012 at 5:48 pm
raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
15 articles 3 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?" -Favourite poem ever♥

I really liked it!. There are a few grammatical errors (of course) and you wrote "you make my hand glued to my hand", I'm not quite sure what that meant... Other than that, I liked it. Just add a little bit more of the emotion you felt. (:


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