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Open your eyes to see what i see

Do you really care
to see what i see
or was it a dare
to come talk to me?
cant you see the beauty
in every little thing?
Can you see it?
or are you blind
i see a butterfly
flying high in the sky
but all you see
is another annoying insect.
Me, i have my eyes wide open
soaking it all up
you have your eyes closed.
why are they closed?
do you not see what i see?
you look inside the box
i look at everything else.
you think I'm weird.
cause i see things differently
do you not see it?
or do i need to open your eyes?
to see the secret
hidden from all
do you have your eyes open?
open your eyes
to see what i see



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JessicaRae7 said...
May 11, 2012 at 6:54 am
I thought this was very well written and somewhat relatable. Loved it!!!
 
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May 13, 2012 at 6:06 pm
thank you so much!
 
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