Open your eyes to see what i see

May 9, 2012
By Brooklynfyre PLATINUM, Pierceton, Indiana
Brooklynfyre PLATINUM, Pierceton, Indiana
28 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Do you really care
to see what i see
or was it a dare
to come talk to me?
cant you see the beauty
in every little thing?
Can you see it?
or are you blind
i see a butterfly
flying high in the sky
but all you see
is another annoying insect.
Me, i have my eyes wide open
soaking it all up
you have your eyes closed.
why are they closed?
do you not see what i see?
you look inside the box
i look at everything else.
you think I'm weird.
cause i see things differently
do you not see it?
or do i need to open your eyes?
to see the secret
hidden from all
do you have your eyes open?
open your eyes
to see what i see



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on May. 13 2012 at 6:06 pm
Brooklynfyre PLATINUM, Pierceton, Indiana
28 articles 1 photo 9 comments
thank you so much!

on May. 11 2012 at 6:54 am
JessicaRae7 GOLD, Buffalo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Music is the air we breathe." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Being sad is a waste of time." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Girls should never be afraid to be smart." - Emma Watson

I thought this was very well written and somewhat relatable. Loved it!!!




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