Finding Myself

May 8, 2012
By Anonymous

finding myself was not always easy
it took me time to reallize
how blind i was how behind i felt

being some where i felt lost
like i for got who i was or i just
never new .

what i felt or was feeling must'n
been revealed my thoughts my ideas stayed away they were bounded in chains

finding myself was in play things holding me back but i break though
realizing how good it feel to let go the pressure up left

releasing tears feel so good
asking my self do i have feelings?
my soul answer they were here all alone

The author's comments:
my past and present life inspired me to write this i hope people look at this and say no one can feel for me i feel for my self and i hope they figure out who they are .

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on May. 11 2012 at 1:24 pm
BekkaGoodwin BRONZE, Haddonfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"We are so accustomed to disguise ourselves from others that in the end we become disguised to ourselves." -Francois de La Rochefoucauld

This is very interesting; I can tell you wrote it from the heart! <3 This is good! I like it. Although there were a few spelling mistakes but that's okay. We all have them :)  It was a bit difficult to read because there isn't really any line structure or puncuation to it but it's not that big of a deal. It doesn't change the way I feel about this poem. I like it a lot!


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