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Her beauty shines in the darkest places,
With her eyes as blue as the ocean sea,
Her attractiveness is noticed from everyone’s faces,
But no one could cherish it as much as me,
There are no words to describe the way she makes me feel,
I have to pinch myself to make sure I’m not dreaming,
Because her beauty in person is just so unreal
She drives me wild and got me screaming.
The chances of me dating this girl are zero to none
Because I see her on T.V more than I do in real life
But I write this sonnet to have some fun
Hopefully you can read it and maybe give it a try.
Beautiful superstar you have got me hooked like other
And I am falling for you like the leafs are changing colors.



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so_joy said...
Sept. 4, 2012 at 7:28 pm
Good job! As LoveOverpowersEverything said, you described her perfectly. Fantastic work, especially for your first time. Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!
 
LoveOverpowersEverything said...
May 25, 2012 at 12:22 pm
I felt as if I knew her (: Keep writing, you have something good. Most of my poems are of love, so we should talk sometime.
 
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