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Breathing is so simple,
yet sometimes it can be so
difficult.
When I’m away from him for so long
I just want to stop breathing
…When I get bullied…again
…When she fights with me
…When I have those re-occurring nightmares
I want to stop breathing

When I can’t talk to him, when I really need to
or when I just need to be in his arms, but can’t be
I want to stop breathing

I can’t deal with this pain anymore so now
…I’m going to stop breathing



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OldYoungOneThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 25, 2013 at 12:42 am:
Being one of the few in love and suffering pain I understand this with my heart and soul. My hand goes out to you to shake it because this poem is exactly how I feel when I am away from him and I lose my mind. I like your style a lot. Its sort of similar to mine because of the lack of poetic devices   ( I love it ). You've aquired a fan.
 
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Josika.Nav said...
May 26, 2012 at 9:24 am:
whoa, powerful! i like the way it flows and its depth. also, the language it is written in, is really easy to read and interpret. great work and keep writing :D
 
dancer25 replied...
Jun. 12, 2012 at 11:44 am :
thanks so much it really means alot
 
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