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I wonder
will our children
have your brown skin
or my blue eyes?

On our first date, will you
open doors for me, or
ask if it’s impolite to kiss?

How will you propose?
Will you spell the question
in sand at our lake, or
utter it, grinning,
as our families watch on?

On our wedding day,
will tears sting your eyes
as you watch me, a white blur,
down the aisle?
Will you whisper your love
as we lie, entwined
in our shared bed?

When we’re wrinkled and old,
will you still take my hand
and say
you knew I was the one
since that day we danced?

All this, while I
watch you from the back row,
your head bent over your desk,
we’d not yet met,
and I wondered.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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ThatMeganThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 12 at 4:44 pm:
Wow! That was fantastic! You have  great description and I love the way it flowed through their life! This would be a great poem for a wedding!
 
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HinataHyugaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 19 at 5:55 pm:
OMG IM ABOUT TO CRY I HOPE MY LOVE KIFE IS LIKE THIS POEM! "sniff".
 
HinataHyugaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 19 at 5:55 pm :
I MEAN LIFE "sniff"
 
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dakotawright said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 10:58 am:
I LOVED this poem it has amazing imagery and it really got me thinking.
 
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tweetiebruceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 1:17 am:
This is really good. I've thought this a few times :D  could youpcheck out my work? Love the feedback and critisim..... :)
 
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Lexie96This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 23, 2011 at 7:24 pm:
This is really good. I've had a couple of wonderings like this... couple hundred. :) Think that maybe you could check out my work sometime? Anyone? Feedback is always greatly appreciated
 
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Dudet95This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 11:02 am:
This is beautiful.This is one one those poems I can picture A couple first meeting then it showing clips of their life as they age on, and the beauty of it is thats how most people want their love to be.Your poem captures the full effect of just a simple emotione that bursts into passion, and I love it.I love the when we are wrinkled and old part:)lol I got a kick outta that, and I very muhc enjoyed this.Well done:)
 
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thegirlwiththemessyhair said...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 6:02 am:
Definitely one of the best ever. A perfect description of a typical crush, put in words more poetic than I could ever dream of doing.
 
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Blue4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 10, 2011 at 9:24 am:

This is amazing, probably the best poem I have read here so far!

Can someone read some of my work, rate and comment? Especially my two attempts at poetry, I really need feedback on those.

 
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ShewhomustnotbenamedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 19, 2011 at 10:12 am:
I am in love with this ! keep writing !
 
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kalim said...
Jul. 10, 2011 at 7:59 pm:
realllyyy liked it, can totally relate!!!
 
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crazychickThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 22, 2011 at 5:18 pm:
so cute! <3
 
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Annabelle294 said...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 9:34 am:
love this!
 
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blossomgirl said...
Apr. 13, 2011 at 8:48 pm:
This is such a relatable poem. Awesome job! Keep writing, I'm excited to see what else you create :)
 
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Lexi-pex said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 2:47 pm:
this was really really good! i loved it!!!!
 
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Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 31, 2011 at 2:37 pm:
I LOVE YOUR POEM!
 
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blueiris said...
Mar. 26, 2011 at 4:18 pm:

i loved it

i could completely relate to it and i think that is why it was so amazing

 
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drmstarlet21This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 7:44 pm:
This is an unbelievably true poem in every aspect of the words. Teach me how to write in such an amazing way. That is a request, not an order.
 
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Bookworm7 said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 5:47 pm:
This is probably the best poem I have ever read. Please write more. I absolutely love it!
 
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ferosa45 said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 5:04 pm:
absolutely ethereal. i am reeling from its effect!!!
 
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destinyleighh said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 2:03 pm:
i absolutly LOVE this.
 
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Apeggy said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 2:03 pm:
this is a beautiful poem and especially true.
 
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ChristineGeorgia20 said...
Feb. 15, 2011 at 2:29 am:
It is so beautiful.It describes a situation that all the girls have lived.
 
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AYO_itsdeja said...
Feb. 10, 2011 at 2:51 pm:
*WOW . That was simply amazing . This is something every girl should read . It's so true !
 
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dreamer_believerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 11:22 am:
these are the types of pieces a die-hard romantic like myself lovveees to find :) you are amazing. you write with such clarity and honesty it blew me away! one of my favorites for suree ;) mind checking out some of my work? keep writing!!
 
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AlyBugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 7:46 pm:
wow                                          
 
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Unknown18 said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 2:32 pm:
o my holy wow that is AMAZING
 
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Valery5This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 19, 2010 at 5:10 pm:
AWWWWWWW That's SOOOOO cute! I loved it <3
 
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Brittany M. said...
Nov. 10, 2010 at 8:39 pm:
love it!!!
 
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pixiedust15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 4, 2010 at 4:47 pm:
Amazing!!!!!!!!!! :)
 
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everyrose said...
Oct. 13, 2010 at 5:00 pm:
This is a beautiful poem. :-)
 
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GreenLover said...
Sept. 14, 2010 at 10:35 am:

amazing. many girls do this and i do it sometimes in my relationship. its fun to daydream of the future and how you think it will happen. i really enjoyed. (:

hope you can checkout some of my new work.

 
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essbeekayy18 said...
Aug. 25, 2010 at 12:21 am:
I love this one. I think about things like that all the time. Every girl does nut you turned those thoughts into something beautiful. Awesome job :)
 
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UrAnGelBabY said...
Aug. 18, 2010 at 4:18 pm:
I think about this kind of stuff eveyr single day when it comes to my relationship. i love this poem..... tagged it
 
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beautifuldisaster18 said...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:54 pm:
I love this! It's what every girl does. Not necessarily the same things, but you know what I mean. This was really cute!
 
Zazawish777This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 23, 2010 at 8:36 pm :

I really like this too! and i agree with you. Will you please rate and comment on mine

 

 
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just.me_899This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 24, 2010 at 9:33 am:
awwwwwwwwwww... :) this definitley deserved to get in the mag...i loved this!! good job!!!! :DD
 
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ShenelleCrystalx3 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:25 am:

That was so good ! Amazing writer ! Don't ever stop :)

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u

 
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Daydreamer14 said...
Jun. 18, 2010 at 11:17 am:
Great poem! Simple, but it captured a lot of feeling. I love how I can relate to it also:)
 
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jesseay09 said...
Jun. 4, 2010 at 9:55 pm:
This is dope !!!
 
lyricsandlimericks replied...
Sept. 1, 2010 at 8:51 pm :
If this is dope, you must be on it.
 
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demetria said...
May 27, 2010 at 4:46 pm:
just one thing to say: try switching the (children) stanza  so that the order would be better. so you would go from date--to propose--to wedding--to kids---to old. unless you want them to have kids before everything else happens...your descision i am just suggesting.
 
mpacheco15 replied...
May 27, 2010 at 5:25 pm :
I liked how she organized it by making it like a daydream. Completely zig-zag about with a connection though.  I love this poem!
 
beautifuldisaster18 replied...
Aug. 1, 2010 at 8:56 pm :

I agree. I think it was perfect just the way it was written.

In my opinion, I don't think it needs any improvement.

 
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GangstaEyesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 24, 2010 at 8:35 pm:
Wow....I love this - it captures the feeling of hopeful love really well. Would you read my poem "Not for Me" please?
 
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mandaaSMILEx3 said...
May 22, 2010 at 8:08 pm:
- I Reallly Have An Understandingg . As A Girlll _ We Too Have Questionss &' Expect An Answer . I Lovee It !
 
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sammie1997 said...
May 8, 2010 at 11:45 pm:
i love it! :)
 
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Jilybeanrb This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 5, 2010 at 7:50 pm:
You captured those special moments very well <3
 
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leona1127This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 5, 2010 at 10:50 am:
I love love love it! SO cute and sweet and very well writen
 
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neonskies3423 said...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 11:59 am:
this is uber cute. i love it.
 
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