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The Last Good-Bye

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Yesterday was amazing with you
The way you pulled me up close
the way you kissed me lips so soft
It took the breath right out of me.

It was like the world shifted
and I watched every pain wash down a drain.
My life with you is like an angel flying-
It was like a new beginning for me.

Yesterday, I said the last good-bye
I will never let you leave my side
for if you shall go-
Then I shall always go with you.

My last good-bye,
that's where I threw away all my worries
that's where I reached the light
and it drowned out all the darkness that binded me to deaths life.

I am really glad you found me
as I am really glad someone like you understands me.
I will always love you for you
and so forever we shall live in a beautiful bliss.



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writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 20, 2013 at 12:44 pm:
wow...just wow. i am speechless. this is such an amazing piece! i cant 100% relate to it...and i absolutely LOVE it! :) amazing job, and keep up the great work!
 
writerauterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 20, 2013 at 12:45 pm :
lol oops little type-o..."i CAN 100% relate to it."
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 1:41 pm :
Thank you soo much! :D And a type- o is ok I make them sometimes too ;)
 
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