The house of my dreams

May 4, 2012
By teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
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It’s the place I adore.
It’s my shelter.
My home has no doors,
You can’t enter.
Time is so minor,
There’s no clock.
Although I have mirrors,
A large block.
And I am reading
Books as often
As I’m drinking
A cup of coffee.
It’s the place I adore,
It’s my shelter.
My heart has no doors,
You can’t enter.



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so_joy SILVER said...
on Oct. 15 2012 at 4:57 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

I think you should finish it:) Mind checking out my work?

so_joy SILVER said...
on Sep. 3 2012 at 3:24 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Great job! The description is good, although I think you could go on describing the appearance of your house. The rest is just perfection. Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

teamo14 BRONZE said...
on Aug. 3 2012 at 3:44 am
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
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thank you very much for your comment, you've got very interesting ideas :)
It's a very old poem so it's kinda unfinished. I just posted it... 

InkWriter13 said...
on Jul. 8 2012 at 4:26 pm
Interesting poem. Kind of short. I feel like you could lengthen it more and go into depth with your ideas here. Definitely has strong moments. Curious question: what did you mean by Although I have mirrors, A large block? Other than that, I loved the rejection of time and the world. It seems almost like a writer's true world--a world of books and words (and coffee). Great work. :) Would you please comment on my poems titled Without the Writer and The Perfect Fit?


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