To Whom It Concerns

May 1, 2012
By Alexzander BRONZE, Ocklawaha, Florida
Alexzander BRONZE, Ocklawaha, Florida
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To whom it concerns,
Mason's work won't be late,
But it may fall on his pancakes,
And stick to the plate.

To whom it concerns,
My TEACHER made me write this.
But I'm just a kid,
So how could I fight this?

To whom it concerns,
I didn't lose my assignment,
So I sadly won't get to be
In solitary confinement.

To whom it concerns,
Mason's great when it comes to math,
But girls don't think of mathletes
When they're cruising their path.

To whom it concerns,
I can't die 'till I'm thirteen,
Too weird to be dating,
Too lame to be mean.

To whom it concerns,
I'm just looking for love,
To give & to get some
Would be more than enough.

To whom it concerns,
I am not made of steel,
And when I get blindsighted
My pain is quite real.

I don't mean to squack,
But it really burns.
Just though I'd mention it
To whom it concerns.



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on Sep. 5 2012 at 12:07 am
Alexzander BRONZE, Ocklawaha, Florida
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Never seen Roseanne before. 

on Sep. 5 2012 at 12:06 am
Alexzander BRONZE, Ocklawaha, Florida
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I've never seen that show, so I have no idea what you're talking about.

surya said...
on May. 26 2012 at 10:05 pm
surya, Rajapalayam,Tamil Nadu, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The woods are lovely dark and deep but I have promises to keep..
And miles to go before I sleep and miles to go before I sleep..

ALL is well dear...
To you whom I concern right now,
Life is long,

there is too much to experience...

enjoy the ride.

cheers,pal...


AbbieWabbie said...
on May. 24 2012 at 10:08 pm
AbbieWabbie, Sandwhich, Massachusetts
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Dude, I totaly think this is the bee's knees. Your poetry is very swell.

Bellers BRONZE said...
on May. 24 2012 at 9:37 pm
Bellers BRONZE, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"If music be the food of love, play on."











--William Shakespeare

Dude!  This was really amazing.  Sorry to hear about your troubles but if you can keep writing poetry like this, the ladies will fall at your feet.  Girls knees turn to jelly when in the presence of a deep poetic mystery man.  Just keep writing.  Things will get better!  :D

eeoopig said...
on May. 19 2012 at 8:29 pm
eeoopig, Somewhere, Other
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nice. good poem :)

on May. 19 2012 at 7:42 pm
realbeautifulheart PLATINUM, Livermore, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Life is a package that you have to sign for. Yes, it's free. No, there's no guarantee as to what it holds. Open with caution, it's 'FRAGILE'." (I made this up.)

I love this! Good job, keep writing! 




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