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I seek destruction,
It is the broken hearts,
Of the girls,
I break.
I seek rain,
It is the tears,
That leak from the eyes,
Of the girls,
I break.
I seek wind,
It is the blow they take,
Those girls,
I break.
I seek anger, sadness, depression,
For it keeps my ego alive,
Because when those girls,
I break,
Cry,
I get stronger.
But a Hurricane is always followed closely by help
And when I strike,
I strike powerfully,
But when I’m gone,
The help can’t attack.
But one day,
I was overcome,
When I had no destruction, rain and wind
No anger sadness and depression,
And slowly died,
Like a hurricane reaching its end.
I will not be that person,
Not anymore,
I won’t break girls,
I will fight for them,
Because I have learned,
That destruction and rain and wind make me feel powerful
But sun, heat and warmth make me feel complete.




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hippiechick99 said...
Jun. 29, 2012 at 3:12 pm:
Wow, this is so amazingly poetic and deep. I think the weather/relationship thing was a great idea, I would've never thought of that as a poem topic. Loooove it, keep writing :)))
 
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icecreamgirl15 said...
May 13, 2012 at 2:12 pm:
omg! anekke?! wait or is this brian's poem...
 
TomorrowisanewdayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 13, 2012 at 2:23 pm :
HIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!! OMG I thought I was the only one who would do this!! I put all my poems on here!!!!!! lololololololol love the name! maybe it should be clumsy intead jkjkjkjkj
 
icecreamgirl15 replied...
May 13, 2012 at 2:35 pm :

haha same! haha wait werent u swag so epic? or did u change ur username. and hey! hahaha :P

 

 
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LoudDreamerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 8, 2012 at 10:28 pm:
Very moving, great job.
 
monkeybrain98This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 12, 2012 at 6:41 pm :
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me because I am not the strongest writer. Thanks very much!
 
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