Hidden Me

April 26, 2012
By Lizzie_Love SILVER, Sanford, Florida
Lizzie_Love SILVER, Sanford, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness is not something you postpone for the future; it is something you design for the present.
-Jim Rohn


I run straight up the stairs
and try to hold it in.
I fling open my bedroom door
and slip on the fan, goose bumps begin.
I grab my baby blankie
and open my closet door.
I do not hesitate
and fall down to the floor.
I crawl to the very back corner
and decide to let it out.
I let the tears pour from my eyes
and shout a silent shout.
No one knows how I feel,
no one knows this saddened teen.
For this is the side that I must hide,
this is the hidden me.


The author's comments:
We all cry sometimes

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on Jul. 8 2012 at 7:55 pm
SinisterKiller BRONZE, Holbrook, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
iff u have nuthin nice to say....then shut upp.
U don't have the heart or the guts to die with me nor 4 me...

welkum. ;)

on Jul. 8 2012 at 7:46 pm
Lizzie_Love SILVER, Sanford, Florida
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness is not something you postpone for the future; it is something you design for the present.
-Jim Rohn

hehe. thank you

on Jul. 8 2012 at 7:43 pm
SinisterKiller BRONZE, Holbrook, Arizona
1 article 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
iff u have nuthin nice to say....then shut upp.
U don't have the heart or the guts to die with me nor 4 me...

lizz?!this was amazing!u seriosly rite this stuff?it was......i'm......i'm speechless.haha.:)

on May. 29 2012 at 4:06 pm
Kestrel PLATINUM, Warrenton, Virginia
29 articles 11 photos 190 comments

Favorite Quote:
-There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy. (Shakespeare, Hamlet)

Love this! it has an almost cutesy little kid feel to it, with the hiding in the closet from monsters visual (at least to me) but in reality it truly is very serious, and i can relate.

on May. 17 2012 at 8:14 pm
madlinejoy SILVER, Deale, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
let go and let God
"Love is not an emotion but a choice"

you should submit some of your work to an actual publisher 

on May. 17 2012 at 8:13 pm
GhostOfMyself BRONZE, Westfield, Wisconsin
3 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You please no one when you try to please everyone" Mark Cuban

Very good, and heartfelt. It unfortunately describes a lot of people's hard experience through life.




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