Go Away (Stay)

April 26, 2012
By chocoholic327 BRONZE, Unionville, Connecticut
chocoholic327 BRONZE, Unionville, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Remember to do what you want and be true to yourself.

I hold together by day
And fall apart by night
All hope has flown away
Nothing now is right

I fall asleep in tears
And wake up with a smile
The weeks feel more like years
'Cause healing takes a while

Speak more of your lies
I won't believe a word
When I look in your eyes
I know there's nothing to be heard

Go away.
Please stay...

The author's comments:
This was written quite hastily and very late at night. It isn't perfect but I would love some feedback on it! Be as harsh as you want, but obviously I would prefer constructive criticism :) Thanks for checking it out.
(I don't usually write about this kind of thing but that night I was very stressed and feeling very hurt. If you don't like this sort of broken-heart feelings poem then don't judge- I write on other topics as well that I hope to be uploading sometime soon~)

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