I walk alone

April 26, 2012
By MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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Black as night
Red as blood
Looking towards heavens light
Drowning in the red flood
Walking on earths bones
Devastating the old ways
I must walk alone
There is nothing you can say


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on May. 3 2013 at 12:48 am
LiraDaeris PLATINUM, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
“You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go...”
― Dr. Seuss, Oh, the Places You'll Go!

The possessive forms need apostrophes. Other than that I've liked this one. It's a cool picture.




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