To be dying

April 25, 2012
By , Pittsburgh, PA
To be dying
Seems hard
For most people to vision
That's all they see
To die
Isn't all that bad
Sure it hurts
But only for a while
Is only bliss
They say
A tunnel
With a bright light
We know
It's more like
Taking LSD for the first time
Mind is opened
To a new take on life
Most can't take it
Refuse to understand
We don't blame them
It's addictive
IF you survive
Repeating the process
To feel the same pain
That has
No words to explain
It's just
Bliss, pure bliss
Nothing more

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DanielM said...
Jun. 5, 2012 at 8:56 am
Wow that was really good. I liked your message and your emotion. Suggestion maybe extend more at the end with a hook.
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