To be dying

April 25, 2012
By Anonymous

To be dying
Seems hard
For most people to vision
That's all they see
To die
Isn't all that bad
Sure it hurts
But only for a while
Is only bliss
They say
A tunnel
With a bright light
We know
It's more like
Taking LSD for the first time
Mind is opened
To a new take on life
Most can't take it
Refuse to understand
We don't blame them
It's addictive
IF you survive
Repeating the process
To feel the same pain
That has
No words to explain
It's just
Bliss, pure bliss
Nothing more

The author's comments:
this is our viewpoint/take on suicide

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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 5 2012 at 8:56 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Wow that was really good. I liked your message and your emotion. Suggestion maybe extend more at the end with a hook.

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