The Complainer

April 24, 2012
By , Grand Rapids, MI
Today I am cranky;
I don’t feel well at all.
When I went to play outside,
I was nearly hit by the basketball.
Oh pain! In my brain!
Several pages of homework, oh dear.
I was almost killed by the chandelier.
When I tried to read my book;
It was clear I broke my Nook.
The screen was cracked.
I got an eyelash in my eye.
I have a pain in my right thigh.
I broke a nail;
My head still hurts.
My Mom told me to get to work!
My ipods dead;
I bonked my head.
I have to make my messy bed.
My room is dirty.
But the worst thing is;
It’s only seven-thirty!





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Angel_Writer said...
May 8, 2012 at 3:03 pm
I like it, It is somewhat random, reminds me of Kurt Cobain's song lyrics. Good Job, Ill rate it 5 star. Please look at mine, titled "Drug Game" thank you!
 
ashley112027 replied...
May 15, 2012 at 2:38 pm
I love your writing!!!! <3
 
ashley112027 said...
May 7, 2012 at 3:16 pm
Please share with friends! My language arts teacher would be so proud if this made it top 100...
 
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