The Complainer

April 24, 2012
By Anonymous

Today I am cranky;
I don’t feel well at all.
When I went to play outside,
I was nearly hit by the basketball.
Oh pain! In my brain!
Several pages of homework, oh dear.
I was almost killed by the chandelier.
When I tried to read my book;
It was clear I broke my Nook.
The screen was cracked.
I got an eyelash in my eye.
I have a pain in my right thigh.
I broke a nail;
My head still hurts.
My Mom told me to get to work!
My ipods dead;
I bonked my head.
I have to make my messy bed.
My room is dirty.
But the worst thing is;
It’s only seven-thirty!


The author's comments:
This piece was written when I was in a cranky. My class loved this poem and I hope you do too!!!

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on May. 15 2012 at 2:38 pm
ashley112027 BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"All you need is 20 seconds of insane courage. Just literally 20 seconds of embarrassing bravery, and I promise you, something great will come out of it."

I love your writing!!!! <3

on May. 8 2012 at 3:03 pm
Angel_Writer GOLD, Chillicothe, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"God didn't take me from you, he only took my hand."

I like it, It is somewhat random, reminds me of Kurt Cobain's song lyrics. Good Job, Ill rate it 5 star. Please look at mine, titled "Drug Game" thank you!

on May. 7 2012 at 3:16 pm
ashley112027 BRONZE, Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"All you need is 20 seconds of insane courage. Just literally 20 seconds of embarrassing bravery, and I promise you, something great will come out of it."

Please share with friends! My language arts teacher would be so proud if this made it top 100...




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