Dead.

April 27, 2012
By Erika2015 GOLD, Monroeville, Pennsylvania
Erika2015 GOLD, Monroeville, Pennsylvania
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Each step I take forward
I get pushed back.
For every positive thought i have
Everyone judges it negatively.
No matter how far
I go in life.
I'm always set back to
Level 1.
There is no love.
No one cares.
All i do is ruin.
Ruin everyone's lives.
I give off hurt and pain.
Anger and sorrow.
You give me life
I give you hell...
Death.
Obviously I'm not good enough.
You want me gone?
Fine, i'll leave.
Dead, lost.
Never found.
My heart stops beating.
I have no pulse.
No thoughts.
No feelings.
No emotions.
Falling.
Deeper, deeper, deeper,
Dead.


The author's comments:
Im confused. Lost in a way. I feel dead and i feel as though nobody wants me but in the one line i say, "You give me life, i give you hell." I feel as though someone is trying to reach out to me but i ignore it. i am so...baffled.

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JPanda13 GOLD said...
on May. 12 2012 at 7:32 pm
JPanda13 GOLD, Roswell, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
just cuz you put syrup on somin dont make it pancakes
Whoever said sticks and stones may break my bones but words can never hurt me, had never been hit with a dictionary

good, it remids me of one i wrote but never posted called in the moment.....it'll get better

Erika2015 GOLD said...
on May. 1 2012 at 9:43 am
Erika2015 GOLD, Monroeville, Pennsylvania
17 articles 0 photos 2 comments
thanks(: i appreciate your feedback

on Apr. 30 2012 at 11:32 am
JessicaRae7 GOLD, Buffalo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Music is the air we breathe." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Being sad is a waste of time." ~Molly Rae Berger
"Girls should never be afraid to be smart." - Emma Watson

I thought this was really powerful. Very good.




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