Gone too Soon.

I know i had a friend,
His name was Corey
He was twelve years old
and his life told a story
It hadn't been that long since he passed
but just think about the good times that was shared and had
even though he was abused
he was a lost soul that was confused
tears might roll down your face every time you think of him
he's in a better place
even though he made a sin
now that i think about it, I'm bringing' it back
I'm doing this for Corey so you know it ain't wack
so bow your head in prayer and stare at the moon
we might just move on
but he was still gone too soon.





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Hayley567 said...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 12:54 pm
i like the poem. it shows you cared about your friend and understood why he did it. great job
 
AgentMexican said...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 10:46 am
me likey ....i think is a pretty good poem,i know how it feel to lose a friend i lost my friend jacob too he killed himself, after his death i was devastaded,i like this i dont usually cry cuz i hate cryiong but this poem reminded me of my Jacob :)
 
artforthesoul99 replied...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 11:11 am
I'm sorry you lost your friend. Now we have something in common, i would've preferred something less death-related. But thanks for your feedback
 
IamtheshyStargirl said...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 10:41 am

I really loved the ending, though the beginning didn't start out too strong. 

I love how you truly wrote it from the heart, I think it really conveys your emotion and memory well. 

It's so sad that things like that happen, happen so often nowadays. 

Thanks for writing this, it's very good, and with a little revision and editing, I think it could be even better!

 
artforthesoul99 replied...
Aug. 3, 2012 at 11:09 am
Thanks for that comment. I think the one im writing now and the one thats getting approved will be better. :)
 
DanielM said...
Aug. 1, 2012 at 1:11 pm
Awesome poem. I felt your emotion. Your really good. Keep it up
 
artforthesoul99 replied...
Aug. 1, 2012 at 1:55 pm
Thankyou :) That means alot. I wrote this a day after my Bestfriend died.
 
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