Notice

April 25, 2012
By seaboundheroesdaughter GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
seaboundheroesdaughter GOLD, Nashville, Tennessee
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You chose Me.
I saw you watching
-waiting-wanting.
I noticed you
(after)choosing me.

After you Saw me
I began looking at you.
And began watching-
waiting-wanting.
I saw you(took a chance)&

you never did anything.
Was I supposed to?
Because-Notice-
you chose me.
Was I wrong to hope?

Now you've chosen
someone else
as it would seem.
Even though you
chose me
And never gave it a try.


The author's comments:
The phrases in the parentheses are like dual thoughts. The work can be read without them because they add more details that don't really fit in a sentence but in a train of thought.

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