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April 25, 2012
By MassieKurh BRONZE, Pittsville, Wisconsin
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MassieKurh BRONZE, Pittsville, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
love is like a tattoo while the process can be painful and the bright vibrant colors form the beginning may fade the product in the end is everlasting.

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You opened the doors of life for me
Beyond those doors I blossomed into:
A rose so crimson I flow like blood form a deep wound.
A rose with a feel softer than silk when caressed.
A rose with a odor so sweet people fall in love with the slightest whiff.
A rose with thorns so sharp they could pierce the surface of the toughest diamond.

© Adam B., Highland Village, TX

The author's comments:
this was inspired by my best friend who has been a major part in my life recently. we may have our fights but no matter what we are inseparable.
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