The One That Left Me Behind

April 21, 2012
By LabitGurl GOLD, Carrboro, North Carolina
LabitGurl GOLD, Carrboro, North Carolina
13 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Before yoy criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them you are a mile away from them, and you have their shoes."


He said he would always love me
Then I find out about her
How he sneaks out at night
Just to get a glance
How he puts me on hold
So he won't miss her call
How he spend most nights going to sleep
Thinking of her

What did I do wrong?
What did I say?
Did I miss one to many calls?
Why would he do this to me?

I want to apologize
Yet, I don't know what for?
I want to hold him
I just don't know if I can
I want to see him one more time
But he doesn't deserve it

You know what?
He doesn't deserve me



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on Jun. 5 2013 at 10:07 pm
liberalartist GOLD, Stillwater, Minnesota
14 articles 2 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Poeta nasicur, non fit. (a poet is born, not made)

yes...lots of passion and sad confusion

on May. 9 2012 at 6:44 pm
vbronk PLATINUM, Winona, Minnesota
23 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.”
― Marilyn Monroe

i really loved this poem. it showed a lot of passion toward the subject!

LabitGurl GOLD said...
on May. 9 2012 at 6:41 pm
LabitGurl GOLD, Carrboro, North Carolina
13 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Before yoy criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them you are a mile away from them, and you have their shoes."

easy to relate here

DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 9 2012 at 6:40 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
6 articles 1 photo 247 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

That was awesome Poem. Although personally i can't realte to i have friends that have gone through this same situation. Anyhow Great Message!!

 


LabitGurl GOLD said...
on May. 8 2012 at 8:31 pm
LabitGurl GOLD, Carrboro, North Carolina
13 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Before yoy criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them you are a mile away from them, and you have their shoes."

thanks for the feed back

katinthehat said...
on May. 8 2012 at 8:29 pm
i really like this, and i can relate.. just one small thing that would have made this even better is if you kept your verb tenses consistant :) really good job though!

on May. 6 2012 at 2:12 pm
alex_gold SILVER, Southlake, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
'You can approach the act of writing with nervousness, excitement, hopefulness, or even despair - the sense that you can never completely put on the page what's in your mind and heart. You can come to the act with your fists clenched and your eyes narrowed, ready to kick ass and take down names. You can come to it because you want a girl to marry you or because you want to change the world. Come to it any way but lightly. Let me say it again: you must not come lightly to the blank page.'

Stephen King

can you please check out something that I have written? Its called Mist-erious Superhero!

SGNox SILVER said...
on May. 6 2012 at 10:00 am
SGNox SILVER, Timberlake, North Carolina
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
'The stars are always there, but we miss them in the dirt and clouds and we miss them in the storms. Tell them to remember hope. We have Hope.' - Renee Yohe

Awesome poem!

I like the emotion you displayed in this. It's good.


LabitGurl GOLD said...
on May. 1 2012 at 4:29 pm
LabitGurl GOLD, Carrboro, North Carolina
13 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Before yoy criticize someone, walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them you are a mile away from them, and you have their shoes."

thank you 

on Apr. 30 2012 at 7:06 pm
alex_gold SILVER, Southlake, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
'You can approach the act of writing with nervousness, excitement, hopefulness, or even despair - the sense that you can never completely put on the page what's in your mind and heart. You can come to the act with your fists clenched and your eyes narrowed, ready to kick ass and take down names. You can come to it because you want a girl to marry you or because you want to change the world. Come to it any way but lightly. Let me say it again: you must not come lightly to the blank page.'

Stephen King

WOW! Absolutely fantastic!

on Apr. 30 2012 at 6:33 pm
madlinejoy SILVER, Deale, Maryland
5 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
let go and let God
"Love is not an emotion but a choice"

that absulutly right !!




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