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The One That Left Me Behind

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He said he would always love me
Then I find out about her
How he sneaks out at night
Just to get a glance
How he puts me on hold
So he won't miss her call
How he spend most nights going to sleep
Thinking of her

What did I do wrong?
What did I say?
Did I miss one to many calls?
Why would he do this to me?

I want to apologize
Yet, I don't know what for?
I want to hold him
I just don't know if I can
I want to see him one more time
But he doesn't deserve it

You know what?
He doesn't deserve me



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liberalartist said...
Jun. 5, 2013 at 10:07 pm
yes...lots of passion and sad confusion
 
vbronkThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 9, 2012 at 6:44 pm
i really loved this poem. it showed a lot of passion toward the subject!
 
DanielM said...
May 9, 2012 at 6:40 pm

That was awesome Poem. Although personally i can't realte to i have friends that have gone through this same situation. Anyhow Great Message!!

 

 
LabitGurl replied...
May 9, 2012 at 6:41 pm
easy to relate here
 
LabitGurl said...
May 8, 2012 at 8:31 pm
thanks for the feed back
 
katinthehat said...
May 8, 2012 at 8:29 pm
i really like this, and i can relate.. just one small thing that would have made this even better is if you kept your verb tenses consistant :) really good job though!
 
Gothica295This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 6, 2012 at 10:00 am

Awesome poem!

I like the emotion you displayed in this. It's good.

 
alex_gold said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 7:06 pm
WOW! Absolutely fantastic!
 
LabitGurl replied...
May 1, 2012 at 4:29 pm
thank you 
 
alex_gold replied...
May 6, 2012 at 2:12 pm
can you please check out something that I have written? Its called Mist-erious Superhero!
 
maddyhatter said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 6:33 pm
that absulutly right !!
 
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