Life As It Stands

April 23, 2012
By msprincess SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
msprincess SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
build a bridge and get over it


Living threw life is difficult enough such in a rush to leave high school not knowing where my next landing will be, struggling and stressing at most is where my life stood still a steadily beat one thing after another problems occurring left and right fast decisions you have to make deadlines you have to meet what's next I'm only one in a group of 1000 more competitive people I'm not trying to be on the very top I'm just trying to be the most successful I can be



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on Jul. 12 2012 at 3:19 am
Pika_Princess, Escondido, California
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First off, I can totally relate with this. It is relatable to and has an interesting structure and form. There are a few spelling errors and I do agree with Daniel, perhaps a bit more detail would help. Nice job!

on Jun. 10 2012 at 10:22 am
msprincess SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
build a bridge and get over it

thanks 

DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 10 2012 at 10:18 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn't do." - Daniel Moto
" I've sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?"- Daniel Mathia

"People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person."-Daniel Mathia

“Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?” – Daniel Mathia

“If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.” – B. Reith

Mhm.....this poem was really intersting the way you wrote was interstng. I liked your ending stanza. My onlu suggestion is maybe adding a tad bit more detail or a hook at the end. Other than that it was awesome


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