Death In The Frozen World

April 18, 2012
By xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."


A teenage girl,
In the middle of winter
Went to the woods
To try to rescue a child
Never to be found.
The snow was falling
She heard a scream
Up by a river
Leaned in to see
If a head was bobbing
But found nothing
She slipped on ice
And went under.
Couldn’t breath
Or find the strength
She was slowly dying.
She was going with the current
Down the river
And found a branch to save her.
She held on
And tried to pull her self up
Onto the bank of the water
Barely had strength
But she got up there.
She lay down
Just for a minute to catch her breath.
Then, she got up
And started to move
To find her way out
Of the woods
Her cloths were heavy
It was starting to get to hard to walk
But she kept going.
The bitter wind
Chilled her bones
Made her even colder.
She could walk no longer
Had no more strength to carry her self
And fell to her knees to
And crawled under the tree.
There she lay, until her eyes closed
And she left the frozen world.


The author's comments:
This is just how i feel inside, I am the teenage girl, and the frozen world/woods is my inner-self. I try to find the kid in me, wishing i never grew up as fast as i did was taking care of myself since i was 5. I just look back at my life and let it spill out on paper....

Hope u all will enjoy

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on Oct. 18 2012 at 1:24 pm
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."

thanks i wasnt sure about it but its ne of my favrite opeoms i be cvreated plz chexk out more of my work  

on Jul. 16 2012 at 1:25 pm
Mantequilla SILVER, Eagan, Minnesota
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SWEET. I love the desctiption and small lines. I also like the pic. :P this is such a cool poem. It transports me to the place you are writing about. 5/5 Well done! :)

on May. 3 2012 at 2:15 pm
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."

Thx... i really like to write. though i write it when its my emotions are strong. i think thats the best time too.

on May. 1 2012 at 11:04 pm
readingmusic BRONZE, Arp, Texas
2 articles 4 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"That which we call a rose by any other name would smell as sweet..." -William Shakespeare "Romeo and Juliet"

You are brilliant...I love your poetry because it has so much meaning behind it. Great job

on Apr. 26 2012 at 3:18 pm
xXxXangelXxXx SILVER, Henderson, Texas
9 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Accept no one's definition of your life; define yourself"
" Love and Loyalty Runs Deeper Than Blood!"
"A wise girl kisses, but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, leaves b4 shes left."

thank you so very much.... it means a lot to know that people can connect. :)

on Apr. 25 2012 at 3:04 pm
firewithdoves GOLD, HARTFIELD, Virginia
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This is amazing, you can really make people connect to it.. atleast I know I connect with it. Such a great job


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