RIVER

April 16, 2012
By THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
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Is it real what i am feeling am i really sampling the sweet taste your lips as we drift alone the glass like liquid underneath our boat reflecting the silvery moon beaming down illuminating the atmosphere honoring our presence. As planet earth turns with an absence of time while reveling the stars draped across the nights sky like fireflies hovering in mid - air . it is amazing how i could see the world so clearly in the depth of your eyes and yet still so many mysteries that lye's beyond the surface of your radiant beauty for which i long that this night will never end faithfully lean in to kiss you minutes too long ensuring my love for you is eternal just as the river beneath us flowing and growing in depth yet i have only reached the surface of your ocean blue eyes and your smile brighter than any star i.unfortunately saying i adore you just wouldn't be enough. i love you. not even close. holding you in my arms on this one of a kind night floating on a river of tears of joy flowing down your rose red cheeks would say all there is to be said with that i hold the complex simplicity of a loves embrace



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on Dec. 13 2014 at 1:09 pm
THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
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thnaks sunshine007 

on Oct. 24 2012 at 2:04 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I have to hand it to you, you really are one of the deepest writers I have ever met. You go into so much detail, I can hardly ever pull that off, but you do so all the time. It is nice having you as a friend poetofdarkness. I have learned alot from you in alot of ways. I am glad you continue to write and I hope nothing ever makes you stop writing. This is a beautiful poem and I love it. Keep up the amazing work!

on May. 16 2012 at 5:30 pm
THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
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Thanks littlesully and landofdarkness I admire both of your articles and I hope that you both continue to write to your hearts content

on May. 16 2012 at 9:00 am
FleshRipper GOLD, Guilford, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm not surprised, it's just kinda suprising." -me

You're welcome! Keep it up you're really good! : D

on May. 14 2012 at 1:57 pm
LittleSully GOLD, Elmwood Park, Illinois
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"The course of true love never did love smooth." William Shakespeare

I really admire your work

on May. 13 2012 at 5:01 pm
THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
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Oh and thanks for the flattering comment :-)

on May. 13 2012 at 4:59 pm
THE.REBEL.REBORN PLATINUM, Prentiss, Mississippi
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heres a tip : dont wish be: and i think your poem would be awsome but jst dont doubt yourself

on May. 12 2012 at 6:37 pm
FleshRipper GOLD, Guilford, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I'm not surprised, it's just kinda suprising." -me

Oh my gosh, I loved this! It was very descriptive and over all just beautiful. Haha, I try to write romantic poems, but I suck at it. My poem "Fill The Void In My Soul" just sounds stupid. In fact, all my poems sound stupid. I wish I was talented like you.


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