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Who You Waited For

April 15, 2012
By Anonymous

Inhaling the stars,
Shining...
Glowing...
Radiant.
Unbinding these pleading, soft desires,
Whisper,
Beckon the violet skies captured in my eyes to surrender...
Am I yours?
Love...
Sing with the wind as it gently seduces the tears lying on my skin,
Listen to the night surrounding us in a melody,
As my breathing speaks the secret of Intimacy...
Sighing so low,
So barely heard by your heart amongst  the rain; Watching contentment soften
the gray Sensuality of your eyes,
I know...
All this time,
I was always the one you waited for each cold, stormy night.~


The author's comments:
This piece is extremely sensual, with the idea in mind that I wanted it portray tender, beautiful love... As in "Making Love" so it's about sex. XD but I wrote it in a soft, hesitant tone, so the feeling I wanted to express is just how beautiful it is... Because a lot of people seem to have forgetten that it's so intimate and they've made it out to seem like it's some kind of joke. It, Ladies and Gentlemen is a personal, intimate act. And should be treated as such. Enjoy(: <3

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on Apr. 21 2012 at 2:16 am
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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SO so so touching. very sentual and sweet. The tenderness and intimacy is all over this poem, but i think the wording maybe could have been a bit better. STILL LOVE IT. AS ALWAYS!!!