Paradise

April 18, 2012
By SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!


A land where everything is right
The flawless features of your imaginary place
The sweet feeling of your heart at race
The sun kissing your skin, oh so gently
Drinking my virgin sun bright daiquiri intently
The flowers brushing along my legs
The crystal clear stream bubbling up close by
Watching the leaves swirl in a dance
I forever want to stay
Loving the feeling of not a care in the world
Just like when a boy tells you those first three words
Then out of nowhere I hear a ringing
Opening my eyes people I know are disappearing
Five minutes to pass
I got to find my next class
That way my paradise I was dreaming can come back.



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on Aug. 24 2012 at 2:29 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Thank you:) Once again, lol

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on May. 18 2012 at 11:41 am
deleted, Miami, Florida
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This is awesome, I could totally picture myself at the beach. The overall bliss reminds me of the paradise in my world, even though it's different in technicalities. Great job, you're really good with imagery :)

bearsftw GOLD said...
on May. 1 2012 at 4:33 pm
bearsftw GOLD, Elmhurst, Illinois
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"Creativity is the highest form of mental functioning." - E. Paul Torrance

Your welcome!

on Apr. 30 2012 at 12:50 pm
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
120 articles 0 photos 348 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

Thanks so much!!:D

bearsftw GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2012 at 2:19 pm
bearsftw GOLD, Elmhurst, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Creativity is the highest form of mental functioning." - E. Paul Torrance

Excellent poem! When I read it, I just pictured myself in complete bliss in on a beach with palm trees. Great job!


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