April 18, 2012
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A land where everything is right
The flawless features of your imaginary place
The sweet feeling of your heart at race
The sun kissing your skin, oh so gently
Drinking my virgin sun bright daiquiri intently
The flowers brushing along my legs
The crystal clear stream bubbling up close by
Watching the leaves swirl in a dance
I forever want to stay
Loving the feeling of not a care in the world
Just like when a boy tells you those first three words
Then out of nowhere I hear a ringing
Opening my eyes people I know are disappearing
Five minutes to pass
I got to find my next class
That way my paradise I was dreaming can come back.

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torilutz8 said...
May 18, 2012 at 11:41 am
This is awesome, I could totally picture myself at the beach. The overall bliss reminds me of the paradise in my world, even though it's different in technicalities. Great job, you're really good with imagery :)
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Aug. 24, 2012 at 2:29 pm
Thank you:) Once again, lol
bearsftw said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 2:19 pm
Excellent poem! When I read it, I just pictured myself in complete bliss in on a beach with palm trees. Great job!
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 12:50 pm
Thanks so much!!:D
bearsftw replied...
May 1, 2012 at 4:33 pm
Your welcome!
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