Lend You My Wish

April 18, 2012
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I see the smile on your pretty face
And the happiness in your green eyes
Now I feel what’s in your heart
And who’s on your mind
Now life for you truly begins
Making mistakes
Finding your own way
And succeeding in love
It’s all a great big challenge
And I hope you learn like I have these days.
I found love
But that love escaped
It left me here
And I don’t want you to hurt the same.
I know I can’t stop what life brings at you though
So I’ll lend you my wish
“I hope you continue to smile that smile,”
And I hope, “Who’s on your heart will treat you like I did each and everyday.”





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torilutz8 said...
May 18, 2012 at 1:04 pm
I love this! Beautifully interwoven emotions, great job, keep it up, I'm really enjoying reading your stuff :)
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Aug. 24, 2012 at 2:31 pm
Thanks y'all!!!!:D
 
SuNshiNe007 said...
May 8, 2012 at 7:54 am
Wow, thanks soo much!!:D And I sure will take a look at that. Thanks for pointing that out!! Hope you have a great day!!
 
snowleopard100 said...
May 7, 2012 at 3:32 pm
I love the mix of friendship with the betrayal of love. It's really deep and connects to so many teens. The only suggestion I'd make is watch your use of adjectives. Ex: rather than saying great,big you could say enormous or even monumental. Otherwise... Awesome
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 1:45 pm
Thanks alot Snow. And thanks for pointing that out I will defenatelly remember that. ;)
 
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