Destroy, Destroy, Destroy

April 16, 2012
By Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now


Destroy, Destroy, Destroy

You people Destroy dreams,
You people put me down, belittle me,
You people have poisoned my heart.

You people tear, shred, rupture
Rapture &Reality.

But I guess it wouldn’t be life
without people to destroy things-
even Dreams, Rapture, and Reality.


The author's comments:
This poem is part of a book a poems i am writing called Number 1 UNwanted.

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on Apr. 10 2013 at 9:34 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

cool poem, but to be honest i would have like more show rather than tel. you are teelling the reader how terible the world is and how some people destroy, but i think that with a little more structure and metaphiors, the reader/ me will be able to resonate more with the feelings presented. the foundation is there, but the constructions not quite finished. great job though! it has  the makings of a real work of art!

on May. 1 2012 at 11:33 pm
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not
I can only see a part
Of this picture he's painting
God is God and I am man
I will never understand
Because only God is God

Hey! This was well done. Keep writing. Maybe try lighting it up a little though. The world isn't all bad :)

on Apr. 20 2012 at 8:26 am
Under-the-Rain GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
18 articles 5 photos 100 comments

Favorite Quote:
Are you ready to go to battle with your mind?- Written by me :)
Lost the battle, win the war//Bringing my sinking ship back to the shore- Paramore, Now

yea my poem is on da website Yeaa!!!

Hope I receive feedback :)



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