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Destroy, Destroy, Destroy

Destroy, Destroy, Destroy

You people Destroy dreams,
You people put me down, belittle me,
You people have poisoned my heart.

You people tear, shred, rupture
Rapture &Reality.

But I guess it wouldn’t be life
without people to destroy things-
even Dreams, Rapture, and Reality.





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Laugh-it-Out This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 9:34 pm
cool poem, but to be honest i would have like more show rather than tel. you are teelling the reader how terible the world is and how some people destroy, but i think that with a little more structure and metaphiors, the reader/ me will be able to resonate more with the feelings presented. the foundation is there, but the constructions not quite finished. great job though! it has  the makings of a real work of art!
 
Atl.Braves03 said...
May 1, 2012 at 11:33 pm
Hey! This was well done. Keep writing. Maybe try lighting it up a little though. The world isn't all bad :)
 
Silver-winged said...
Apr. 20, 2012 at 8:26 am

yea my poem is on da website Yeaa!!!

Hope I receive feedback :)

 
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