A Feeling

April 15, 2012
By Poetic_Person GOLD, Shippensburg, Pennsylvania
Poetic_Person GOLD, Shippensburg, Pennsylvania
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There is a tingling feeling inside me
It makes me feel pride and joy.
No words can describe this;
No works could express
The meaning;
The reason,
My feeling.

It makes me have sudden glee,
It opens my eyes
To what I could not see.
The feeling itself is a message,
A thought
A message of life
Kept in the realms of my heart.

No one else
Would understand,
No one could compare.
It is me,
And
I am it.
This feeling sets me free.



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on Jun. 25 2012 at 10:37 am
Poetic_Person GOLD, Shippensburg, Pennsylvania
18 articles 8 photos 40 comments
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

siglo15 SILVER said...
on Jun. 24 2012 at 7:25 pm
siglo15 SILVER, North Andover, Massachusetts
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I really like how you really nail the fact that certian things can't be caught in words. Just like words can't be reduced to math, feelings can't be reduced to their word names, and you capture that really well. I also really enjoy the personality I get when I read this poem. It makes you sound very unique and individual. Keep it up! :)


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