Beauty of Suffocation

April 16, 2012
By WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...


Haunted.
Dreaming.
Against my will,
This mind is over-taken..
And,
With nothing left to say,
No more words to scream,
I watch as once again,
My love is stolen...
Gone.

But was it ever really there to from the start?

So silent,
Just quiet,
For so long...

Will healing ever come?
Or will the darkness wound me,
Cut me,
With memories of eyes so blue and passionate...

Will I ever be able to breathe again?

...Sweet Suffocation.~


The author's comments:
Will I ever forget him?

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on Apr. 21 2012 at 2:37 am
SweetSandyFlower GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Not everyone has to go to college because ..hello!.. PIZZAS DONT DELIVER THEMSELVES!!!!

Not your best, but still really good! Very well written.

Shivam GOLD said...
on Apr. 21 2012 at 2:33 am
Shivam GOLD, Lucknow, Other
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Its nothing like nothing or all.. its just that how far you climb up the tree before you fall..

i truly understand what you meant by"sweet suffocation" nicely written..... a true effort..well done....

damsel SILVER said...
on Apr. 21 2012 at 2:27 am
damsel SILVER, Mumbai, Other
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Mit guten willen kann man alles machen. ( means... with gud will, one can do anything)

luvd it....nice one...u truly write gud huh

on Apr. 19 2012 at 3:30 pm
Wonderment DIAMOND, Scranton, Pennsylvania
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So. Once again I tottaly love it. Your emoutions shine throw. I feel this poem alot. And I acually relate to it too, which is always nice. Another wonderful peice. :)

EverlastingM said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 10:10 am
EverlastingM, Cary, North Carolina
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This is really good (: I like the way you write...its different, but still really awesome lol good job (:

on Apr. 17 2012 at 11:17 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

The "to" isn't supposed to be in there... I hate typos. >.

on Apr. 17 2012 at 11:16 pm
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

YES I'M THE FIRST COMMENT :) Anyway, this is just as beautiful as the others... I love the way you write!! keep up the amazing work dear :)


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