Beauty of Suffocation

April 16, 2012
Against my will,
This mind is over-taken..
With nothing left to say,
No more words to scream,
I watch as once again,
My love is stolen...

But was it ever really there to from the start?

So silent,
Just quiet,
For so long...

Will healing ever come?
Or will the darkness wound me,
Cut me,
With memories of eyes so blue and passionate...

Will I ever be able to breathe again?

...Sweet Suffocation.~

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Tonedeff said...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 2:33 am
i truly understand what you meant by"sweet suffocation" nicely written..... a true effort..well done....
SweetSandyFlower replied...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 2:37 am
Not your best, but still really good! Very well written.
damselsumbul said...
Apr. 21, 2012 at 2:27 am
luvd it....nice one...u truly write gud huh
Wonderment said...
Apr. 19, 2012 at 3:30 pm
So. Once again I tottaly love it. Your emoutions shine throw. I feel this poem alot. And I acually relate to it too, which is always nice. Another wonderful peice. :)
EverlastingM said...
Apr. 18, 2012 at 10:10 am
This is really good (: I like the way you write...its different, but still really awesome lol good job (:
WrittenEmotions said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 11:17 pm
The "to" isn't supposed to be in there... I hate typos. >.
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 11:16 pm
YES I'M THE FIRST COMMENT :) Anyway, this is just as beautiful as the others... I love the way you write!! keep up the amazing work dear :)
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