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The night lies in the wake of destruction
nothing but silence.
There is a fear that the walls are closing
in on me to fight what I have left here.
Sparking darkness flutters on the ceiling
inside my box of dreams
couped in the steel frames where faces fix smiles,
yellow stained, the sunshine of memories.
They are bouncing back, back to the times of
no remorse or sin that has captured my lost soul.
Lying down, holding thoughts in cupped hands
reminiscing through my lines and wrinkles
But then it stops.
Time is freezing to thaw in the newborn heat.
Reincarnation begins as the soft
slumbers in and falls on my deep set lids,
counting out the fear and gently, swiftly
slowing down.



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torilutz8 said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 3:59 pm:
Loved it :) you're really good with imagery, paints a picture in my mind. Keep writing :)
 
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Maryberry28mt said...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 3:42 pm:
Love it!
 
Wilson1994 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 30, 2012 at 3:47 pm :
thank you so much!
 
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firewithdoves said...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 8:13 pm:

Don't underestimate your skills like so many of us do. It is a really intruiging poem, I love it.

Write on

 
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