kiss from silver lips

April 10, 2012
By mariahisabellevin PLATINUM, Santa Ana, California
mariahisabellevin PLATINUM, Santa Ana, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Now you see me, now you don't
Don't ask me where I'm at
'Cause I'm a million miles away"- Green Day


there was tension at first
a heavy, questioning pressure
from your mouth
(should i keep going?)
against my arms
and i gasped and nodded my head
in time with the strums
to savior
the black veil brides song that
makes us feel like
we're not alone
and as you opened your lips
to my skin
i felt the sting and pull
of your blades
and i let the time drip by
in blood



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on Apr. 17 2012 at 5:44 pm
mariahisabellevin PLATINUM, Santa Ana, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Now you see me, now you don't
Don't ask me where I'm at
'Cause I'm a million miles away"- Green Day

savior :)...not my ALL time fave but it is definately up there

on Apr. 17 2012 at 5:41 pm
The_Real_ArielNever_Died PLATINUM, Boston, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"To love me is a ticket to hate " - Myself

I know this off the topic ... but which song by them . ? <3

on Apr. 17 2012 at 5:25 pm
mariahisabellevin PLATINUM, Santa Ana, California
32 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Now you see me, now you don't
Don't ask me where I'm at
'Cause I'm a million miles away"- Green Day

well, for what its worth, i didnt think that making the subject soooo obvious was a good idea, becuz then id get a lot of haters...but i DID like your idea...creative

on Apr. 17 2012 at 5:22 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Wow, I was way off.

on Apr. 17 2012 at 5:16 pm
mariahisabellevin PLATINUM, Santa Ana, California
32 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Now you see me, now you don't
Don't ask me where I'm at
'Cause I'm a million miles away"- Green Day

it can be interpretd that way, but i was initially writing about cutting...:/

on Apr. 17 2012 at 4:57 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

Is this about vampires? If so, then I loved it---especially the line about the Black Veil Brides! Are both the vampire and the victim included in this poem---each other's perspective echoed in the poem?

 



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