April 13, 2012
By EbonyandIvory PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
EbonyandIvory PLATINUM, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
28 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness is only a theory.
Fate is my only enemy.

I want vengeance
That's all I know
The word
The action

To say it
Invokes hatred
To make it
A motive
To achieve it

I want vengeance
My parents told me
Grabbing it is
How to survive

None of them can measure

When you've done
What you've done
I get
So malevolent
There is no forgiveness
That you can give
I want vengeance

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Zach_M BRONZE said...
on Aug. 20 2013 at 10:04 pm
Zach_M BRONZE, Andersonville, Tennessee
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I thought it was very simple; your thoughts revolved around one thing, and you didn't elaborate thoroughly; you expressed Vengeance in a form of need, and it didn't make sense. Vengeance should never be a need toward anything unless it's provoked by a force in which opposed it. I thought this poem was rather unique though; i only wish you would have elaborated.

on Feb. 13 2013 at 3:09 pm
InuLover_95 BRONZE, Mena, Arkansas
4 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When you look through a shattered window, it is not the world that is broken, only your perception of it."

just three little letters... W... O... W... it's so sad and i feel the pain

Ebony W. said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 7:07 am
thanx always lookin 4 contributors

Ebony W. said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 7:07 am
thanx always lookin 4 contributors

Ebony W. said...
on Apr. 27 2012 at 7:06 am
love ur stuff 2! always lookin4 contributors in my forums!

on Apr. 25 2012 at 9:23 am
Good job love it

on Apr. 24 2012 at 9:47 pm
EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
8 articles 0 photos 72 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We have it in our power to begin the world over again." -Thomas Paine

Very intense and very powerful, you definitely get the message across with emotion and urgency. 5/5.

on Apr. 24 2012 at 8:38 pm
SkylerMorningstar GOLD, Barrie, Other
13 articles 1 photo 47 comments
really cool :)

on Apr. 17 2012 at 9:22 pm
Katcarnero BRONZE, Waco, Texas
1 article 0 photos 2 comments
Amazing :)

on Apr. 16 2012 at 7:59 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I really liked this poem and loved the word choice. Keep writing :))

on Apr. 16 2012 at 4:46 pm
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

Filled with emotion. . . love it.


~ Free :)(:

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