April 13, 2012
I want vengeance
That's all I know
The word
The action

To say it
Invokes hatred
To make it
A motive
To achieve it

I want vengeance
My parents told me
Grabbing it is
How to survive

None of them can measure

When you've done
What you've done
I get
So malevolent
There is no forgiveness
That you can give
I want vengeance

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Zach_M said...
Aug. 20, 2013 at 10:04 pm
I thought it was very simple; your thoughts revolved around one thing, and you didn't elaborate thoroughly; you expressed Vengeance in a form of need, and it didn't make sense. Vengeance should never be a need toward anything unless it's provoked by a force in which opposed it. I thought this poem was rather unique though; i only wish you would have elaborated.
InuLover_95 said...
Feb. 13, 2013 at 3:09 pm
just three little letters... W... O... W... it's so sad and i feel the pain
katieRainbows said...
Apr. 25, 2012 at 9:23 am
Good job love it
EmmettLaFave said...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 9:47 pm
Very intense and very powerful, you definitely get the message across with emotion and urgency. 5/5.
Ebony W. replied...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 7:06 am
love ur stuff 2! always lookin4 contributors in my forums!
SkylerMorningstar said...
Apr. 24, 2012 at 8:38 pm
really cool :)
Katcarnero said...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 9:22 pm
Amazing :)
hippiechick99 said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 7:59 pm
I really liked this poem and loved the word choice. Keep writing :))
Ebony W. replied...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 7:07 am
thanx always lookin 4 contributors
Winged.Living.Free.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 4:46 pm

Filled with emotion. . . love it.


~ Free :)(:

Ebony W. replied...
Apr. 27, 2012 at 7:07 am
thanx always lookin 4 contributors
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