I Don't Know

April 13, 2012
By niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
niner PLATINUM, Hartville, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Isn't it funny how you broke my heart, but I still love you with all the pieces?"
"It's easy to stand in a crowd, but it takes courage to stand alone"
"What would you attempt if you knew you could never fail?"


Do you like me?
You asked me such a simple question
And I was for sure
That I knew the answer
Duh, of course I do
But maybe I don’t
Why don’t I know?
Is it because you broke my heart?
Yes.
One too many times
To be exact
If you asked me
To tell you my
Honest answer
I’m not positive that I could
Because it might make you
Regret asking
And make my heart hurt
So much worse
But then again
If I don’t tell you
You’ll never know
And quite frankly
I won’t know either
So maybe
For the time being
It’s best if you
Don’t know the answer
To the question
I know
No better than you do



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niner said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 2:51 pm
can you show the grammar mistakes? and this wasnt supposed to be a poetic type, just a message in a form of nothing origional, but i see your perspective :) thanks!

on Apr. 18 2012 at 3:44 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;
To tell one's name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog"
-Emily Dickinson

I really liked the message of this poem, but you easily could have made it a lot more poetic if you added a few descriptive words. There were also a few grammer mistakes in there. Only reason I rated it 4/5. Still loved it though. keep writing.

on Apr. 18 2012 at 2:51 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet's work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.

~Salman Rushdie

Good job!! :)




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