Deep Hatred

March 23, 2012
Deep Hatred

The world so cold.
Love is so faded.
Evil is so present.
This is called deep hatred.

Children are neglected.
Wisdom has degraded.
Destroying has become common.
This is called deep hatred.

Minds have become twisted.
Kindness has been shaded.
We put each other down.
This is called deep hatred.

Lets come together as one.
Lets show that love is sacred.
Lets not be so cold.
Lets not show deep hatred.

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Janelle7 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2014 at 2:39 pm
Wow! definatley true and amazing talent! keep writing and show that world what youve got!
dolphincrazy226 said...
Sept. 12, 2012 at 1:36 pm
your idea of using parallelism and repetition definetly gets the emotion through.  But it's a little difficult about what your message is about. It seems a little too ranty, but your format is amazing.  Great job:)
LittleLadybird said...
Sept. 11, 2012 at 1:30 pm
Love this. Sooo much!! Ur poetry is amazing, u have a real talent for it! :D x
starzforever said...
Jun. 20, 2012 at 11:07 am
this poem is so real this beauitful
831onelove said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 3:57 pm
Really good poem :) I love how simple it is and yet how powerful the poem it self is. 
BlueLilies said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 12:35 pm

This is really good. I really wish that people would follow these words. Keep up the good writing. :)


Blackrose84 said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 9:46 am
Good job... Plz talk to me now and stop acting  like your some one else because i care alot about u like hwen u went off to surgery all i did was cry so plz talk... you r the closet friend i could get.... plz talk to me
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars said...
Apr. 12, 2012 at 9:45 am
This is soooo goood, and I think it's really powerful too (: GOOD JOB.
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