My Wish

April 1, 2012
By gossamergirl GOLD, Nowhere, New Hampshire
gossamergirl GOLD, Nowhere, New Hampshire
15 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." ~ Moulin Rouge


I wish you were here.
I wish you were mine.
I wish you were with me
All of the time.

I wish you were closer
than we ever could be,
I wish you were lying
here right beside me.

I wish I could see you
more often than now.
I wish I could keep you
forever with a vow.

I wish for your love
which I know will not cease.
I wish that we stay
forever at peace.

I wish for you
like plants wish for rain.
I just want you to know
I'm not in much pain.

I wish for you always
to be there by my side.
I wish I can someday
be your lovely bride.

I wish that we live
somewhere forever
until that day
when we can't be together.

I just want you to know,
you mean so much to me
that only death can
separate you from me.


The author's comments:
I just got to thinking and this is what came out of it. i hope you like it.

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on Aug. 15 2012 at 2:38 pm
AcidRoses SILVER, Elmont, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Many that live deserve death and some that have died deserve life, can you give that to them? Do not be to hasty to deal out death and judgement, even the very wise cannot see all ends."


"Can't get no more free randy!"

I really liked it! It was sweet and romantic. Good job.

on Jul. 9 2012 at 8:56 pm
thedancingblackflame GOLD, Adrian, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
The tongue can be a fire, either passionate or burning-- Lily Jones, loving departed friend.

i like it it is sweet and gives off a natural vibe.

 


on Jul. 9 2012 at 8:56 pm
thedancingblackflame GOLD, Adrian, Michigan
10 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
The tongue can be a fire, either passionate or burning-- Lily Jones, loving departed friend.

i like it it is sweet and gives off a natural vibe.

 


on Jun. 27 2012 at 11:04 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
1 article 0 photos 273 comments

Favorite Quote:
We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

Awesome keep posting! :-)

on Jun. 27 2012 at 11:00 am
starzforever GOLD, Sebring, Florida
15 articles 0 photos 35 comments

Favorite Quote:
being me is the greatest gift

this poem makes me warm in side

bigblue GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2012 at 5:17 pm
bigblue GOLD, New Market, Maryland
16 articles 0 photos 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All you need is Love."-The Beatles

I love this one too. You do a great job bringing the emotions to life in your work. fantastic :)

on May. 20 2012 at 10:30 am
Free_One PLATINUM, ????, Ohio
40 articles 1 photo 773 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am not invincible or unstoppable, but I stay strong because it is the only way to survive in this world."

This was beautiful!! I love this! It flowed perfectly!!! Great job! *Applause*

 

~Free :)(:


on Apr. 13 2012 at 9:38 pm
gossamergirl GOLD, Nowhere, New Hampshire
15 articles 1 photo 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return." ~ Moulin Rouge

hey any comments would be greatly apreciated (sorry i can't spell)


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