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My Wish

I wish you were here.
I wish you were mine.
I wish you were with me
All of the time.

I wish you were closer
than we ever could be,
I wish you were lying
here right beside me.

I wish I could see you
more often than now.
I wish I could keep you
forever with a vow.

I wish for your love
which I know will not cease.
I wish that we stay
forever at peace.

I wish for you
like plants wish for rain.
I just want you to know
I'm not in much pain.

I wish for you always
to be there by my side.
I wish I can someday
be your lovely bride.

I wish that we live
somewhere forever
until that day
when we can't be together.

I just want you to know,
you mean so much to me
that only death can
separate you from me.



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DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 15, 2012 at 2:38 pm
I really liked it! It was sweet and romantic. Good job.
 
dancingshadow said...
Jul. 9, 2012 at 8:56 pm

i like it it is sweet and gives off a natural vibe.

 

 
dancingshadow said...
Jul. 9, 2012 at 8:56 pm

i like it it is sweet and gives off a natural vibe.

 

 
youngspeare said...
Jun. 27, 2012 at 11:04 am
Awesome keep posting! :-)
 
starzforever said...
Jun. 27, 2012 at 11:00 am
this poem makes me warm in side
 
bigblue said...
Jun. 25, 2012 at 5:17 pm
I love this one too. You do a great job bringing the emotions to life in your work. fantastic :)
 
FreeBeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 20, 2012 at 10:30 am

This was beautiful!! I love this! It flowed perfectly!!! Great job! *Applause*

 

~Free :)(:

 
gossamergirl said...
Apr. 13, 2012 at 9:38 pm
hey any comments would be greatly apreciated (sorry i can't spell)
 
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