crying silent tears

April 1, 2012
By kristyn22 BRONZE, Manvel, Texas
kristyn22 BRONZE, Manvel, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
life is a beach and im just playing in the sand


crying sulent tears because you just dissapeared

never a father, just a friend
so why do we pretend your a man nobody knows
an pld photograph your face barely shown
crying silent tears
none seens to hear
your every mothers fears, because of what youve done
so why do we just pretend none knows what you did
your face barely shown
crying silent tears
even after all these years
i long to know you
i guess you will never be a father
you dont give your self a chance
SO WHY EVEN BOTHER????
you tryed
but then you gave in
so now i cry my silent tears
crying silent tears
you said you knew you would never be our father

never a father just a man on the phone
never a father just a man in an old photograph

The author's comments:
i wrote right after my mom told me the truth about my real father

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on Apr. 14 2012 at 4:04 pm
kristyn22 BRONZE, Manvel, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
life is a beach and im just playing in the sand

silent not sulent ..... im stupid

 


on Apr. 14 2012 at 4:03 pm
kristyn22 BRONZE, Manvel, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
life is a beach and im just playing in the sand

thx .... its all true ..... and i be sure to do that next time

 


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on Apr. 14 2012 at 3:54 pm
deleted, Miami, Florida
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I like the general idea, it's a really cool theme. I would just suggest proof reading and reading it out loud to make it flow nicer. Good job :)


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